Guy Fawkes Redone

Research following tutorial - Henry VIII title sequences.

I can see exactly the point about my typography when I look at this sequence compared to my own. I do really like the effect from the light writing but when I did it I was a bit concerned about the rounded shape of the letters and how it doesn't really fit with the period the personality is from. I have looked for typefaces that look like handwritten text from Guy Fawkes' time. I want the type to still look like it is being drawn out but I want it toned down and created in a more subtle manner. The typeface that I have decided to go with is 'Aquilline Two' but I want to work on the kerning slightly as it is uneven. 

Typography: 

Titles revisited

Tutorial feedback

Things to work on:

Blake - 

• Some parts a bit slide show like (esp. at beginning) try to alter this so less like this.
  
• Need to fade all things at the end together (title, series titles and figure)

Cook - 

• Slow down the quote and ending so both are up on screen longer for the audience to read. 
  
• Slow down the place names - have several appear together, add blending effect or move over long period of time so not looking like they are just stuck there.
  
• Perhaps zoom out on map only instead of following the vector paint line

Fawkes -

• Try different typography - Uppercase old style?? see prologue show reel and Henry VIII title for Channel 4 current series. 
  
• Ideas for sound - Apex Twin - dark mood, melancholy 

so far..

I am going to take the work I have done on all my titles so far to the RSA. 

This is where I think I am at with them: 

William Blake - Completed

Captain Cook - Needs some reworking of timing and sound

Guy Fawkes - Needs sound